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Re: Brokenhearted
_ very short poem but you expressed the idea clearly. _ well, just my opinion, but I think you should've made this longer so that you could've described every emotion ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Te Quiero
TPak, haha! I guess you're right.. haha, never knew about the Lyrics forum, just now. :D Thanks for letting me know! :)
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Newest Photographs
--- hi! I really like photos of flowers too! I hope you'll try taking photos of red roses next time!I like these photos so much, but the one that really ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Charcoal Drawing
WOW, it was actually impressive !! :)
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Fair Friendship
-- aw, is this really supposed to be sad? Anyway, I like it because that's reality. I've got nothing else to say, ahm, sorry about that. :O
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Te Quiero
Te Quiero is the Spanish/Mexican phrase for "I love you". Mi Amor means My love. I'll let you hear this on Youtube if ever I get my guitar back soon! ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Are you rejecting me?
--- wow! I definitely like this poem! :D Really explains well what a man would sometimes think when they get rejected. ;) -- speechless, speechless, speechless... :D
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Dear Momma.
Okay, let me try to correct some things. Well, you cannot depend on my corrections though, these are just my opinion or what I think?? Hope it will help. There ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: through my eyes
hello! --- I like the poem, well, I got the message somehow, the only thing I demand is to make this poem longer so that you can explain the emotions ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: REUNION; At the Beach
Test try :D hahaha! CHAPTER ONE It was a very cold evening on the deck of that luxurious cruise ship. At last, everything happened according to plan- the Gueverra High ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: The Fire
] I make really short, honest comments so please bear with me. :D ] first, I say that you're a great team.. :D This poem sounds good, even the concept ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Post-storm
] good poem you have here! ] you clearly described what happens after a typhoon/storm :D ] have nothing else to say, sorry :D
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Imagine
] good poem, :D tee-hee! ] honestly, it seemed a little slow-paced, but it's cool. You have been descriptive, I like the way you paint a picture through your words ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: King of Pirates, Queen of Soul 3
CHAPTER FOUR A few weeks after the Prom night, Valeria, who was Analia's beautiful, curly, brown-haired best friend with a sweet look on her face, and friendly, brown eyes, closed ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Do not click this.
] whoa, first of all.. I hate you. I hate you for letting me fall into this prank! :D hahaha! Seriously, I love this poem, you got me caught here, ...
Apr 16, 2011