Wranna

I loved this poem especially the rhyme scheme, I always feel that abab is the best rhyme scheme. I also liked how you used the repetition of "Some love the ...

I am only posting the first chapter so far, just to see the response it gets. If the response is good I might post the second chapter when I am ...

This poem really was amazing. I really like how the last four lines had a different rhyme scheme, but maybe if those four lines were seperate from the rest, if ...

I really liked it, however at first I thought you were writing in third person so when the end came along I was confused. If this is a create your ...

Because I was crying, crying softly While you sang for one last time You stood in front of us And shared your feelings with the world. So now we were ...

I really liked this, although when he was reminiscing about how he and Elizabeth met I would have liked it if he got more in detail about how they met ...

I just finished outlining my novel and getting to know all of my characters, but I just started the first chapter, so wish me luck! :)