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Thank you so much for the review,I'll follow the suggestions given.Thanks again for for time.Your reviews are ii-depth,learning a lot.

Thank you so was way more helpful.I meant the 'pinion' as the birds wings.But, the line you suggested makes more sense.And i'll leave the impacts as is so great of ...

Thank you so was way more helpful.I meant the 'pinion' as the birds wings.But, the line you suggested makes more sense.And i'll leave the impacts as is so great of ...

This was a great review.Thank you so much,I do have a problem with formation of small sentences.I totally get your point.I will work on those suggested.Thanks again for your time ...

Thank you so much! It didn't strike me to use: "down my cheek flows the tears" ,thanks for that.And also I meant "my heart weighs heavy",thanks for the alteration of ...

Thank you so much.This is great review, I am learning a lot from your review.I meant about a women facing obstacles in her house, but won't give in that is ...

Thank you so much.you can very well edit this and send me,i'll take the suggestions positive. Yes, I think our writing is an escape from this real world.

Thank you so much.Your comments are awesome it encourages me a lot.Will work on the suggestions given.Much appreciated and encouraged.

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It was. I'll focus on my rhyme scheme more

This is a great comment.Thank you,I'll work on those you suggested.That's so nice of you to have a tell on my name.Thank you so much for that.This may be a ...

Wow! Thank you so much for the this great comment.I am exactly looking forward for such critics to improve me.It's not at all an offense.I totally take it as optimistic ...

Thank you so much for your comment.About your question,Yes, to not let my heart to stop, to give up that easy.I get your point of view.Thanks to you for that.That ...

Thank YOU for your work