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Thanks for sharing this story.

Thank you! :)

Thank you so much for your review! I work on the suggestions given

Thank you so much for your encouraging words. I'll make the corrections now :)

corrections made. Thank you! And I changed that line." ..with coke" to "they all laugh as if it is a joke."

Thank you so much! "I'll go for I screamed to the notch, my mind fears The sound of my soul, my body bears but it isn't a sound which anyone ...

Thank you so much. I'll send you the links.

Wow! Thank you so much for your time and the review. I'll make the corrections as suggested. :) I got the idea now.

This article was informative. The lines have made an emphasis on the issue. These lines below especially were of grasp to the theme: "A boy fond of clothes and chocolates ...

I have placed the heart beside my poem :) Thanks!

Thank you so much. But you've reviewed on "Before it's been edited." It's totally my fault in placing in down. Your suggestions is of great help. I will make the ...

Thank you! The credit goes to Radrook and you. Thanks for the encouraging words.

About the last stanza: You have said, "But in two rhymed lines, you need to use the same number of syllables." I changed it. Thanks to you too.

Have edited my work, thanks for the advice. It was what everybody has suggested too. About the joke, very true. LOL.

Thank you so much, your words were motivating. About the romance thing: Yeah! Am a hopeless romantic. LOL.