Wolfdra

The only thing I can say is that I know I could do alot more to it, but this wasn't meant to be a serious piece [giving alot of my ...

@ Cspr - Do you mind if I call you Cas? I'm a little confused on your review. You point things out, but then you go back and you praise ...

Would you like help? I could help if you wanted. XP And I know how it is, I'm kinda the same way.

I know it probably does, but at the time I wrote it, I honestly was more focused on, well, ranting at my notebook than anything else really. You're welcome all ...

I'm at least glad that you did put in th paragraphs, but I don't see much other editing other than that. My offer's still up if you want it.

Always do have fun. XP I'm glad that you liked it, even if you don't like the genre much. I'm glad you kept with it though.Thanks for the advice, but ...

Yeah, I'm working on changing things around with the review yesterday by Ced. I would love for you to beta read it, if I ever got off my fat ass ...

No, no, I agree with alot of your points, and that's the reason I put it on here, to get this type of feedback. Thanks so much for looking into ...