-
Re: Light
I'd love to give you a review, and I have read the whole thing, but it's just so long! I'm not saying that it's a bad thing [though for a ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Darkness
I know it probably does, but at the time I wrote it, I honestly was more focused on, well, ranting at my notebook than anything else really. You're welcome all ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Darkness
So, little more depressing than what I've posted before, but I wrote this a while back, when I was feeling pretty damn depressed. I still do, but that's beside the ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: I'm new and I need help!
It's because you need to post a lengthly review to earn alot of points. You have to point out corrections if you see any, tell why or why you didn't ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Adolescent Immortals
I'm at least glad that you did put in th paragraphs, but I don't see much other editing other than that. My offer's still up if you want it.
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Drowning
You, my friend, were successful in actually making me cry. I've read only a few that are actually able to do that. I applaude you. I liked how you did ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Adolescent Immortals
Wow, that's kinda kiling my eyes to read because of the lack of paragraphs. But, I've read it and so I'll sat that it REALLY needs it. If you don't ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Shadows of the Future [Working title]
Always do have fun. XP I'm glad that you liked it, even if you don't like the genre much. I'm glad you kept with it though.Thanks for the advice, but ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Shadows of the Future [Working title]
Alright, well, this was inspired by a dream that I had a while back. I had originally made it into an RP on another site, but it unfortunatelly didn't take ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: The Key of Endril: The Key Returns
Yeah, I'm working on changing things around with the review yesterday by Ced. I would love for you to beta read it, if I ever got off my fat ass ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Fireworks
I, myself, am truly jaded against America, much in the same fashion as you. I never really felt anything towards America when I was younger, but like you [if these ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Mic Night - Chapter Six
Man I love this. And I hate girls that do bring back guys, even when they've been assholes and everything else, just to end up hurting them again. Is it ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Burning
Wow, I loved this. I had read when you posted in the welcome area, and so I wanted to look into one of your works. I wasn't disappointed. I saw ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Dear Winter,
First off, this is wonderfully cute. I love this so much. I didn't really see anything wrong with how you worded it, or how the puntuation was placed, it all ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Dialogue for characters
Ugh, thank you both so much! This helped alot from both of you, and I really like that thread that you posted, all helped clear up my confusion. ~ Wolfy
Jul 6, 2011
