Wolfdancer95

I had only read this one chapter, I found it surprising I could follow the story and understand what was going on. The grammer mistakes were passible and hard to ...

The layout was a little jarring, When someone spoke and the action is on another line, you can merge dialogue and action, and Lady Purple did a good job with ...

One interpritation of Schizophrenia, I wonder how this is going to go, the first chapter doesn't give much hint to what's about to happen. The red and Blue thing is ...

Very nice, Interesting and I like how you had it from her general POV. It was a little short (to my standards, but it maybe just the site layout) but ...

Dude. DUDE. Minds think A like, I was JUST writing on a workshop Idea from a year ago (In a few days I'm putting it up, I did NOT copy ...

Wow. Jarring, a squimish topic I couldn't stop reading until I was done, and a ending that puts soup opera's and the like to shame. What makes it strangely fantastic ...

love the Idea, but the summery needs a little work. So her fake parents are heartless? and I am confused about the love as well, is it a parantal love ...