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Re: Cloning
21st centry, humans have discovered the way of cloning. The process is to take a formed DNA cell and inject it into a mother to carry it to term. (paraphrased, ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Beauty or Brains?
I'm 16, female. And I would say that it's rather the person's personality, you know, that little thing called love tthat is supposed to strike randomly? I wouldn't care if ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Abortions
And you're aware that the dairy and egg industry and the meat industry are one and the same? Are your clothes made in sweat shops? Do you wear leather? Do ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: working on my biggest Project ever! D:
Woah, sounds like an epic tale that appears as a story within a story. I like the idea, it seems close to the seven deadly sins conscept, to go with ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Character deaths
Depends on the character. Death is a device in fiction to create an impact on the viewer. In a light-hearted scene which suddenly ends with a character dying can go ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Writing the last chapter before the story is finished?
No, it will not hinder your writing and will blend in as well as you can write :) Usually when I write a chapter before I come to it I ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Tape recorder of Friend?
My Story has my main character exploring a haunted house, I would like her to go in by herself but she needs to be speaking or she wouldn't talk with ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Shatter
Thank you for the reviews everyone, Clear up, did a little edit with the grammer. After the contest I'll explain the scene in my head to clear it up for ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: The Bandaging of a Life
Discribing why I love this is almost impossible. A clear story told with less then 150 words, clear as in, we can see the whole thing play out without a ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Shatter
I am Lyra, I am a genius, I am insane. I saw people as glass, created in all shapes and sizes with the ability to survive amazing impacts. I could ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Is homosexuality a choice or a result of nature?
I'm pretty sure not all Christians are Homophobes, Homosexuality is both natural, and not natural. Not natural in the sense that we weren't built for same sex reproduction, but natural ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: My Deepest Desire
I love it! The background to getting to the mirror was well done, and her personality was shown with her concerns of being expelled. I particually liked the third paragraph ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Mirror Mirror... Am I fairest?
I turned to see what room I had hide in, the chairs and desks where stacked against the walls. In the centre of the whole room was a large mirror. ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Demonize, Revitalize
The last paragragh... Was awesome. the only nit-pick I have is= I am the worker, the fighter, the monster, th e liver , the lover. That jarred me a little. ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Darkness Within 3 (Now)
You did Wolf pack research! you have no idea how many people put wolves in their story and NOT research (No one on on this site I know of.) Intersting ...
Aug 2, 2011
