Wolfdaemon

This really fascinated me, to say the least! My favorite part had to be the beginning ;) my only suggestion would be to put something between when the scenes switch ...

As usually, this was very interesting...and exciting ;) maybe give more description of the Blondie and the brunette (-ey) girls. just a suggestion. It would be good either way, one ...

Hey Tori ;) Me...again. as usual, i loved it. some minor spelling mistakes but nothing life threatening...well, for you anyway. iris maybe. Very clever with the pink Sobe, i love ...

Hi! great story ;) it really caught my eye, i have a feeling i read this before, did you post it awhile back? hmmm. well anyway, the only major prob. ...

Hi! Again, me, lol. I did really enjoy this one ;) Shotka seems like a likable fella and Iris a actual human, nice reactions! Her reaction about Boris (Boreas lol) ...

Hi, its me... Okay, i really liked it, you are very descriptive, you definitely have a story with alot of potential ;) if you like books about assassins, as i ...

Hiya, me again, hope your not getting tired of me :p Okay, this was another of my favorites (there is a imaginary list lol) i like Sam, you describe her ...

Hi again! Sorry for not commenting lately, i have been out of town for a few days, but now, well, I'm back! this one piece (in my opinion) has been ...

Okay! this had a definite Percy Jackson feel (maybe its the son of Hermes thing). I still enjoyed it though, alot, it made me laugh, which is a good thing ...

Here i am! i thoroughly enjoyed reading this, there were some typo's like “I learned a new trick since we last meet ” Deanna smirked. ( met , not meet) ...

This is just my kind of fantasy. the, mythical, fantastical stuff that really sparks! i like the main character, i feel my mc and your mc would get along great ...

Hey! I enjoyed this story! For one, i feel our main characters would get along, lol, and the other because i loved how you ended it! Nice names too, i ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this! I liked how you described the lady in white :) I'm sure other people on here can give you a more detailed critique on any ...

I liked it! Hehe, the one thing about the story that got me was the names! They are a mouthful! I had a problem where i would make huge difficult ...

i really liked this! i am terrible at reviews on grammar and what not, so i am just saying this about the story ;) i read it through and was ...