Wolf_Link95

This was really good, i liked the rhythm and the lyrics (i understand the quotes), although the rhythm was dodgy in some places. Without a re-bel-lion, But overall it was ...

omg this is almost defeintly the best zelda fanfiction i have read! I cant even find any flaws expect the bit with the dragon's and dragoons, but as you say ...

Its good , I like the part about the salt in your wound. Can I confess that Conro R is actually my brother and I helped him write some of ...

ok then...

This is my fanfiction book ^_^ lol it only took me 5 mins

ok i liked it but there where like a few bits which i dint understand "Seven days ago" i didnt understand why that was there. was it because there where ...

thanks and yey for ocarinas

She whistled loudly, looking around for a flutter of wings. Ellima whistled again, whispering ‘Ario’. (End of Part One) i like the idea how the bird comes when she whistles ...

hi im new here i joined this site to help start my spoof book of various films and i also hope to make a few freinds who will help me

i loved this poem i also think it was a good idea with the opening being the same as the ending, i found this poem is very readable i have ...

lolz short and cute last line didnt really fit but overall good job

very good i got the feeling of depression and i liked the rhyming good job XD