WolfGirl101

Yor metaphors are phonomenal, and I really get the poem. Most of the poems I review are either too vauge or too straightforward, but yours is perfect. I hope you ...

I really agree with the last review, those were my favorite lines in the poem. It has a great flow to it, and there wasn't many mistakes with the grammar ...

I really like how well the words flow, and I like how descriptive you were when describing the field. I don't think it sucks, but I would like it if ...

I like it, but some of the lines could use changing, you know, give it more punch to the emotions your describing in this poem. Overall, it's really nice. Please, ...

Wow, that's really beautiful. I like how you use a very free form feel to it, and not just blunt poetic sentences. The one thing is without is misspelled. But ...