WolfGirl101

Yor metaphors are phonomenal, and I really get the poem. Most of the poems I review are either too vauge or too straightforward, but yours is perfect. I hope you ...

I really agree with the last review, those were my favorite lines in the poem. It has a great flow to it, and there wasn't many mistakes with the grammar ...

I really like how well the words flow, and I like how descriptive you were when describing the field. I don't think it sucks, but I would like it if ...

First, I really love the colors, they add a dangerous and fiery edge to the picture. Also, the reflection in the eye gave it an ohterworldly look that seemed to ...

That was a really beautiful poem, and I just want to say know, I really want you to keep writing. Just one thing, in every line in a poem, the ...

I like it, but some of the lines could use changing, you know, give it more punch to the emotions your describing in this poem. Overall, it's really nice. Please, ...

Wow, that's really cool looking. I just think it would be more eye-catching if you made the letters in a neon color, and bolder, because it would look really contrasting. ...

I really loved this. I like how you're specific with the experiences the narrator has had, if that is you. I like it especially, because I know I'm speaking for ...

Wow, that's really beautiful. I like how you use a very free form feel to it, and not just blunt poetic sentences. The one thing is without is misspelled. But ...

Note: This is part of the first chapter. Tell me if you want to hear more! I pant as I run through the forest, bumping into the great oak trees, ...

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