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Thanks Ning! I wish I could add more description, but the maximum word count [for my project] is 500 words, so I can't. :cry:

Thanks! :D

I promise an in-depth critique as soon as I get back from Piano lessons! Promise!

Ok, the edit is up. :P I don't know how much better it is, but...yeah.

Wow, thanks so much! :D That's a good idea; I'll add more about what's actually going on in the story. :P No, this is definitely not the first Chapter. I ...

That's a cool idea! I'll find some way to incorporate it! :D Also, I'm going to add some stuff to this...like her thinking how she wouldn't be able to fight ...

I'm not sure about the wings--she can use them when she's in her elven form, and also in her Second Nature. But it's painful for her to maintain them for ...

Thanks Seraph! I'll make some changes...maybe I'll submit a revised-revised edition? :P

I want me to be an author too :P And I want you to be an author... Hell, I want everyone on this site to be an author! xD

Thanks :) I didn't abandon this--I posted a revised edition a couple weeks ago. :P

Two hours later, Dante snorted in disgust, as Felix drooled and snored on Dante’s shoulder. Get rid of the comma after 'disgust'. ^.^ Oh well, Dante figured. Now was as ...

*glomps* Thanks so much Heather! :D About the Dylan thing, I'm not sure. I never really understood in the movie but in the end, I think that he's glad he ...

Thanks! I'll go and fix that now! :)

Turns out I have more time on the computer than I thought I did, so here's my next review: Again, I put my comments in bold P.s.- This still isn't ...

Thanks Summer! I will definitely read some of DesperateRomantic's stuff :) Keep writing your story, .:AYRA:. P•S•- Do you speak Spanish? That is way cool! 8)