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Thanks! :D

Oh yeah...I'll give those back to you ning. Sure, I'd be more than happy to lend them to you. I can only give you the first two though, since I'm ...

Hey, I'm not mad. I just didn't know what to say.

Okay, er...thanks, I guess. I didn't want to do a rhyming poem, and...oh well.

Yeah, I have an issue with detail. If it isn't to much to ask, could you tell me what parts that the detail takes over and makes it hard to ...

Ah! I'm going to review this, but first you need to separate this into paragraphs. At the moment it's a huge block of text and the prospect of picking through ...

Well, it's a metaphor but not a metaphor...if that makes any sense, anyways. 'Economic', as I'm sure you know, means avoiding waste or extravagance...well, that's what economical means anyways. Maybe ...

Thanks! How could I forget that you helped me? There's still a lot of description, but I hope it doesn't interfere as much with the actual events as much anymore. ...

Thanks everyone! Yeah, I took out some description but I think it's important to have more than average in Fantasy because, well, it's hard to explain. I won't bore you ...

Thanks! I edited this tonight but I haven't gotten around to posting the revised version yet.

Thanks! I get your point on the garbled message and I'll work on that. Hopefully I'll get around to posting an edit...sometime. Lol. Narf, -Ayra

:D Thanks! I really should explain more about the wolf thing...you see, she isn't a werewolf, or a normal wolf. Really she's a Miokoda, and the wolf shape is her ...

Wow, thanks for the review! I'll fix the punctuation and edit this a bit. :)

I didn't read this. :oops: The length is quite...overwhelming. You should shorten it into smaller posts and then I'll give you a critique.

Thanks for the review! I'll work on the characterization, and add a bit explaining why the heck she decided to kill the poor man. :P Hrmm I think you tried ...