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I could...good idea. :) Thanks, fellow Speaker of the forum! xD

*sighs wearily* You, Ning and Bob the Shadeslayer, have both forgotten to post questions. :roll: So I'll post mine: Dare you name all the synonyms for ebony?

And why is that? Is there something wrong with the critique and advice I posted? :?

:? I don't think you do to much 'telling'... Here's an example where you showed: The sand I see is bleached into a glow by the sun in the sky ...

Indeed I do. :wink: What is it in the cranium of a human being that makes them know that zebras have hooves?

Thanks Ning! I wish I could add more description, but the maximum word count [for my project] is 500 words, so I can't. :cry:

Thanks! :D

Ok! :) That way, when we turn into wolf-demons, the lawyers will recognize us in our former bodies. You know, when we get arrested for eating the mayor's beard. :wink:

Lol, I'm glad you posted these Genevieve. :D Lol, our faces are like...nefarious. :lol:

Walkin in da hall with a chip on my shoulder Ok then... I'm guessing you meant to use all the 'da' and 'walkin' and all, but I don't really like ...

The soft sand that comforts me like a soft blanket against my skin on the beach. I don't like how you used 'soft' twice...maybe try something like this: The soft ...

One fights for love One loves to fight Neither surely are right. I think it should be: Surely neither one is right. And when all those loved parish, one comes ...

Never mind! It does let me! Squee! :D

Ok, I can't seem to choose between these avatars: #1 #2 #3 #4 So...yeah. :P I really wanted to use moving avatars, but it won't let me. :?

7/10 It's cool, but I feel like it's missing something...