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Hey, could you review this? It's Romantic fiction, but it's not really ... romantic ... at all. ;P Thanks! If you want me to review something of yours in return, ...

Thanks! I appreciate your review, especially the part about Edward Cullen. ;P I'll work on that. Why are they speaking french? This is maths. Is it set in france? No, ...

angels-symphony -- you're gorgeous! :0 I love your hair; actually I'm gonna dye mine a colour like that soon.

Thanks :D If you want a review in return, check out my thread.

Hey! Well, seems like you've already received quite a bit of feedback on this piece. *sigh* But I'll try my best ... The bright light of the day began to ...

Okay, some of you guys might have noticed that I never wrote a critique for you; it's because I don't want to review pieces that have always received tons of ...

Dance Inside (By The All-American Rejects.) But it's almost over, and next on the playlist is She Wants To Move by Pharrell. :P

:0 This calls for a sexy party! *stewie griffin dance*

Hey. It appears that several in-depth grammar critiques have already been posted, so I'm not gonna bother with this. Suffice to say that unfortunately, your grammar needs a lot of ...

Okay, I'm back! Sneaking on the computer really (I'm grounded again). *sigh* I'm ashamed to admit that the only work I've critiqued so far is Azila's "Ours" ... oh wait, ...

Hey! :) I'd really appreciate a review on this: It's Romance ... sorry. I mean, nothing remotely romantic happens in it, so I don't even know why I rated it ...

Hey! This is kind of really short ... not much to review. Grammar is quite good; I only noticed a few things: Believe it or not they still have meetings ...

Hey Zills! :D The air is cool here – cooler than the others – and the pressing whine of machinery a bit louder. Others? What others? Other rooms? Hospitals? But ...

Banned for having a silly first username.

I do agree with the previous reviewers that you do a lot more showing than telling. I think this is an okay poem, but it could benefit from a lot ...