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this poem i wrote isn't very good how could i improve it You could could start by being literate! You know, using capitals at the start of your sentences, capitalizing ...

Oh, it was supposed to be short. In that case, Kudos! It was cool...and for some morbid reason, I enjoy reading about people being hanged. :twisted:

I promised to review this, didn't I? :twisted: But it's no chore. I've been wanting to read this since you told me you put it up! A few short seconds ...

This sounds interesting! That’s bad for your cubicles. Jim couldn't lose his cubicles now! He was so young! Cubicles? Aren't those like, stalls in a bathroom? Weird. Ahhh...did you mean ...

Fan! You're back! :D Oh wow, it's been so long since I've talked to you! And guess what? I learned how to do a real review! With quotes 'n all ...

9/10 Love the monster bit, and it's cool how you added a link to your writing. :)

Banned for having more stars than me. :P

9/10 Haha, I get it. Instead of 'Singing in the Rain', right? :wink: P•S•- My Custom title doesn't come from anywhere. :) Well, it comes from my mind. :P

Mwuaha, I have come to review your other written works. *rubs hands together* :twsited: Back in Metropolis Jason was riding in the car home with his father. I think there ...

That was awesome! Usually I dislike Haiku's, but that was totally cool. I loved the way you described the swells/clouds. Also, the part about waiting for fury was pwnful--like waiting ...

Awesome! That's so cool! I will so watch it when it comes out on Youtube! :D

That was pretty good! I have no nit-picks, because the grammar was flawless and it flowed pretty well. However, it was very, very cliched. Everyone has learned to associate black ...

Lol, this is a topic about... squirrels . I haven't heard of them...or maybe I have. :? Ah yes! They are the ones with the blue fur and protruding eyeballs...or ...

6.5/10 I don't get it...it's like you were trying to be funny or something. :?

7/10 It's cool, but kinda plain.