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Re: Haiku
You write poetry too? I'm so jealous! :D Anyways, sorry for being so harsh in my latest reviews of your work. :( I meant well. 1.Canvas of colors, splashed across ...
Dec 2, 2007 -
Re: Writer's Block
HHmmm...Writer's Block is really annoying. >.< I have writer's block for my Ayra story, but to wait it out, I'm making profiles and such. You could try that, but I'm ...
Dec 2, 2007 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
6/10 I used to hate it but it's growing on me...I still don't like the fact that she's not wearing a shirt though...0_o
Dec 2, 2007 -
Re: the moon is
I agree with Cade on the matters of Description and Diction. 'Females' does bring to mind diagrams and such. 'Ladies' sounds...weird. And 'Girls' sounds too...I don't know. 'Women' is just ...
Dec 2, 2007 -
Re: Lady, Leave Your Chaos At Home
Wow, that was so cool. 8) I agree with twit--this was deep. Or abstract. I dunno. Same thing, really. Or they are to poor, decrepit souls like me anyways. Well, ...
Dec 2, 2007 -
Re: *Shifty Eyes*
A large portion of the total population seems to be horrible people with bland and uninteresting personalities. Well, you sound like you have exactly the opposite--an interesting personality. Possibly
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Hey there
Hi! Welcome to YWS! As Azila mentioned, it's really quite addictive, but it's totally awesome! Anyways, yeah! My name's Camille but you can just call me Ayra. :) Feel free ...
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Rain Storm
Oh wow! Azila, I am sooo jealous. Meh. Your descriptions are vivid and powerful, and I really get drawn into the story. You should be published. Seriously. Anyways, everything has ...
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
I actually have a question of my own... What exactly does an Instructor do? Are they assigned one person to instruct or do they just have to critique everyone's work? ...
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Blood Moon
Wow, this was really cool! I love wolves, and I can't wait to read more of this! It is kinda short though... Anyways, Keep writing, Ayra :)
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: A poem about the lynchings of cattle kate and her husband
Ok, I will! xD
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
You go to the 'Read and 'Review' page, and there is a link that says 'View all drafts and topics posted to'. I'm not sure it'll work, but here's the ...
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
8/10 It's slowly growing on me...:P
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: My English project--Akeelah and the Bee
Thanks! :) Yeah, I probably should have a new paragraph for different dialogue. I'll go fix that now! Cheers, Ayra :D
Dec 1, 2007 -
Re: Winter
I loved this! It was so much better than your 'Another School day' poem--the rhyming here doesn't seem forced, and it's just, as Motherflippinflapjacks said, unique. Well, MFFJ (Motherflippinflapjacks
Dec 1, 2007