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That was... Amazing. Really, that was. The imagery was excellent and it flowed sooo well. It had a semi-hidden current of wisdom, but it didn't sound like a lecture. I ...

*sob**bawl* I hate wars, I really do. They are just a wast of lives, and all for what? Nothing. What greatness has ever been born of War? Anyways, it's cool ...

7.5/10 I don't really get it, but it has a certain...sound to it that I like. ^_^

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Ok, some of you here may have commented on my original 'A Winter Midnight'. Anyways, I found writing that piece really fun, and so I decided to start journals. Basically, ...

Nah, no need for thanks! *does a cartwheel* I feel...Happeh! Happey-Happy-Happy! Hahahahahahahahahhahah! Sorry, I just ate chocolate and I'm having a MAJOR spazzzzzz!

*gaspness* *double gaspness* *X100 gaspness* Anyways, now that I've finished gasping, let me say this: YOU ARE LIKE, AN AWESOME PHOTOGRAPHER! It's true! I wish I could take pictures like ...

Ok, well... Ok. No offense, but that wasn't very good. The structure was..okay, I guess, but the theme is just pointlessly emo and gruesome. I mean, there are good emo ...

Earlier that morning she had attempted to speak with her friends but with no luck, they has turned her down and walked away. Replace the comma after All except for ...

Firstly, this would look way better if you used proper punctuation. Secondly, the imagery was pleasing. Thirdly, unfortunately, this was cliched. There are countless poems on this subject. But anyways

You? Bad at poetry? I think not! The grammar and flow of this is flawless, but I think a little imagery would be nice. I'm a horrible poet so I ...

:? Chris-- For someone who [used to] read lots of books, you don't seem very literate. How about using capitals at the beginning of your sentences and capitalizing your I's? ...

Whoa...that was really, really good. There was a faint but unique rhyming scheme and I loved it! & I broke off your legs, to keep you here all night. Won't ...

:smt104 :smt103 :smt118 :smt119 :smt105 :smt088 :smt087 :smt090 :smt108 :smt107 AAHHHH! Scary doll! I mean, the photos in themselves are good, but I just hate the doll. No offense or ...

Well, I'm not sure how I feel about this. I was really intrigued by the title, but when I read the first line...yuck. Here's what I think about this in ...