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Thanks! I get your point on the garbled message and I'll work on that. Hopefully I'll get around to posting an edit...sometime. Lol. Narf, -Ayra

Yeah. I'm not sure that this'll work, but you rate everything about the person above you; their username, signature, custom title (if they have one), avatar, country etc. Then you ...

9.9/10 Awesome! But I don't like Alice in Wonderland.

:D Thanks! I really should explain more about the wolf thing...you see, she isn't a werewolf, or a normal wolf. Really she's a Miokoda, and the wolf shape is her ...

Well, this was excellent. :) I liked the unique theme and the subtle imagery, and I can imagine a voice--a simple divine voice--reading this. I love the kind of tone ...

Hykuas? Meh...did you mean Haikus? Anyways. I liked this poem--it was very sweet, even though I can't relate 100% of the time. Unfortunately... I think you could add more imagery ...

Merp! Meneer! Narf! I'm terribly sorry about that. :oops: Sometimes I get carried away. But anyways! Welcome to YWS! It's an amazing place. Really. my writing is good i think ...

offence, but this poem nearly makes me afraid to comment. It's very..."in your face", for lack of a better phrase. I agree. As I read this, I couldn't help but ...

A glimpse of sunlight broke through the cloudy sky above rendering the ground with a moment of bliss for just mere seconds. I'm not sure I like that as an ...

Wow, thanks for the review! I'll fix the punctuation and edit this a bit. :)

Hhhm...that's tough. Maybe a spoof [or something like a spoof] about pirates but with a comical twist. I would pick it up in a bookstore. :) Starlit

And on that burning night we stood, While the sky blazed crimson above us, And the grass was tipped in flame. The world was on fire, And so was I. ...

I didn't read this. :oops: The length is quite...overwhelming. You should shorten it into smaller posts and then I'll give you a critique.

Well, this is very, very short. But at least you acknowledged it. :wink: So. *Cracks knuckles* Let's get this party started. The whole theme of this poem is really rather ...

Meh? Is that all you can say to me? For shame! (Jk) :P By the way Via, I give you a ...*drum roll, please* 8/10