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You have a really cute dog. :D I think it should be more centered, though, so we can see the rest of him. I also think the flash makes his ...

It's kinda cool. I like the kind of grey-sepia colouring but the tree should be more in focus. Your niece looks wicked though--she kind of has a lost expression on ...

I agree with Gwen on it being too plain but the angle is neat. Also, her suggestion to Photoshop it is a good one--you could make them electric-blue or something ...

I really liked this. :) The neck seemed odd; too bulgy, almost. But I dunno. Could be just me. The shading was well-done and I really liked the kind of ...

The first one is pretty good; I like the bold lines, but the shoes do look weird. I love the tree. It's just...really, really pwnful. It's cool how only half ...

These were pretty neat, I must say. I didn't particularly like the 3rd, 4th and 5th photos though. That may just be because I dislike photos of people, but some ...

Heehee, I like number five too. :) They're all rather cool--I like the style you used, and although I didn't always understand what the text meant, it was cool. Cheers, ...

Well, since everyone else has their own Writing Log page, why shouldn't I have mine? CURRENT WORKS: And on that burning night: A poem...about passion and fire, really. It's my ...

You mean that a character in your book wrote this? Okay, whatever. This was incredibly cool. I love the rhyming--it didn't seem forced--and the imagery was simple but pleasing. Keep ...

Hhhmm... Meh. This was good, but as a poem, I feel it should have more imagery and emotion. This is just basically a rhyming chant and all we get from ...

Wow, that was stunning. I didn't exactly understand all of it, but there's many poems whose meaning elude me on this site. I'll let you decide whether we can blame ...

I have to agree on the mixed up part. The flow was pretty good, but I think this was cliched. We've all read poems about light amongst darkness and the ...

6.5/10 I don't get she dead? She looks too posed to be actually dead. :?

Thanks! I edited this tonight but I haven't gotten around to posting the revised version yet.

Ok, well, this died. :P I'm afraid I can't revive this; I should be focusing more on my actual writing. But it was fun while it lasted.