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This is kind of random, but I like it. The characters are already well-developed but I think you should add more imagery and setting description. You also do much more ...

Squee! These are awesome! My favourites are 13, 14 and the third last one. Very witchy and cool. *bursts out laughing* And the dancing witch girl on the last row ...

These are well drawn, but I don't really like them. Usually I love the sketchiness of your drawings, but in these I can't really tell what it is. :? And ...

Oooh, these are coolio. They're very whimsical, sort of. I love the sketchy lines and the swirls. :wink: The first is my favourite because of the wind/swirls around the guys ...

They're not showing up on my computer. :(

Yeah, I can't see it either. :?

Wow, you have cool handwriting! The figures look a little chunky, but I think that's intentional. These are cute! :) Good work! -Ayra

I also agree about the arms and shoes, but I really like the sketchy look of it. :) I love the clothes and the shovel. :P So yeah...this is really ...

*Gaspness* These are beautiful! My favourites are #5, #6, and %7. But they're all simply gorgeous! You're so lucky to have gone to that village, it's so pretty...*stares wistfully at ...

I love the see-through glass-ish effect. Really cool! The second one is my favourite...there's just something cool about it. ^_^ Anyways, neat photos. Cheers, Ayra :D

I wasn't originally going to review this because I'd have absolutely nothing to say, but the lines kept ringing through my head on my way back from school, so... Anyways. ...

Is it okay if I join as Blizzard when she's younger? Like on her own, you'll know what I'm talking about Fadalia. I won't be able to get on very ...

Thanks Nikki! I appreciate the compliments. :) But I'm sure you'll find that there are plenty of bette young writers on the site. :wink:

9/10 Meeeerp

Meg! I never knew you could write poetry But you can! I love the way you said it would take away everything. I would nit-pick and point out certain bits ...