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Squee! I really like this. :) It's pleasant and easy to understand, yet complex at the same time. Very poignant. I really can't think of anything that you could improve ...

My tetrouse life had yet again left me with no answer. 'Tetrouse' sounds awesome, but it's not a real word. :P Did you mean 'Torturous'? A tear beggings to form ...

Thanks! :) Is there anything I can improve on though?

Wow, this is very powerful. And so, so true. You really hit hard with this poem. I actually think was very poetic. I think good poetry should be full of ...

Moo! I love that name. It pwns. Anyways, Welcome to YWS! It's a great place and if you ever have any questions, PM me. Normally I'd say that I would ...

I tried lots of other Writing sites before settling in with YWS. And honestly, YWS beats them all. Here people are friendlier, more helpful, and just generally, I dunno, better? ...

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:shock: No, Gwen. Remember what I witnessed in the Chat room at your house. :twisted:

Who is Shadeslayer? :?

10/10 The colours are really cool, and it looks really magical. You look really pretty in that pic too!

Ah the joys of copy and past! 0.1/10 Er. Not very nice. She has no clothes either! I don't like the colours and its a bad drawing. I don't like ...

I shall indeed enjoy your sorrows. :twisted: Well, the blog would be the place for this. But narf, from what you've told me, he likes you now, so hoorah! Anyways. ...

Sorry, but I won't be joining then. :(

Ah! Before I review this, I would suggest separating it into more manageable paragraphs. At the moment it's a solid wall of text and that looks rather...discouraging. If you do ...

Echo to Audy up there. :wink: I agree that you should switch up the rhyming, but otherwise, this was neat. It's very elegant in an emotional way, but I do ...