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Erm... To be brutally honest, this was: - Unoriginal - Bad quality - Badly thought out Most lines didn't make sense. Also, I noticed that you tried a rhyming scheme, ...

Echo to Brad up there. >.< You have a very basic skeleton of a poem here. You have emotion - I can see taht you just blurted this out without ...

Everyone already mentioned it all, so I don't have anything to say, really. I liked this piece; it was beautiful in it's simplicity. The line breaks were kind of irksome, ...

I agree with tose 'uns in dark green up there. Poetry can be short - but then you need to condense your ideas into a couple sentences while still keeping ...

Firstly, no double posting and/or bumping up your own thread. ^_~ But now, onto your poem. I look up at the sky above me Above the ceiling of water Then ...

Wow, thanks so much! :D That was really helpful! I'll make the changes as soon as I get home, because now I'm using an agonizingly slow school computer. >.< This ...

Username: 30% I can't stand sticky caps and numbers in a username. >.< Custom title: (none) Avatar: 79% Coolio. 8) Country: 100% Riveroaks is the coolest name ever! I love ...

9/10 Lol. But it's incredibly distracting. ^^

The hrsh wind was at my back and racing past my ears blocking all sound around me. There's an A in harsh. ^_^ Ihad no choice now for if I ...

8/10 Cool website...but my sig is funny?!

10/10 Awesome!

Lol, I'm an unsuspecting author! Come review my topics! xD

Mad... Don't feel like this. Seriously. Gwen didn't mean to make you depressed...:cry: Try to get over it; there are girls at your school, right? Just as there are guys ...

*Does a freakish little dance* I've got a BLUE star! W00T!

Seraph, I'm sure you're much prettier. Than me, anyways. :P