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Re: Welcome New Members!
Hey Koro, and Welcome to YWS! One thing though - maybe you shouldn't use as much internet speak? (As in being illiterate and saying things like 'thnk' instead of 'think'.) ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: Who do YOU think could be published?
Have you ever read something on YWS that seems good enough to be published? I know I have. I was reading some poems by famous people, and I couldn't help ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
Saint Razorblade - That catscan thing is the coolest! And I love your cat's paws. They are simply adorable! And the colour! *steals the cat's paws*
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: We all fall down
Thanks! Wow, my little 'ole piece is getting tons of review today! And oh yeah...I probably should change it to 'lie'. Lol.
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: My Humanity is My Own
the morrow -- This is very creative. I really like it, although some of the vocabulary was too complex for my 12 year-old mind. You, crutch of the mind, fetter ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: We all fall down
Thanks! :D The piece is meant to be vague, but I'll definitely fix the tenses. *smacks head* How could I have made so many stupid mistakes? While this juxtaposition of ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: Under the Never-Ending Sky
bkwrm - This is a pretty good poem. You have beautiful imagery, and the theme is vaguely original; but I get the feeling that I've read lots of poems about ...
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: We all fall down
Thanks canis! :) I am going to revise this...*shifty eyes* but not right now 'cuz I'm sneaking on the computer...I'm still grounded. >.
Dec 28, 2007 -
Re: We all fall down
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Dec 27, 2007 -
Re: Neopets
Oh god, I used to be obsessed with Neo. My account was 'wolfwildfire'. I didn't go for the neopoints or the games - I had a guild which I loved, ...
Dec 27, 2007 -
Re: My English Project as of yet
Thanks! :) I was wondering why it didn't work before, and now I'll definitely go have a look. ^_^ Oh, and I made the edit, but I didn't post it ...
Dec 27, 2007 -
Re: Through the Mirror /P
Incandescence - Wow. Your prose is almost as amazing as your poetry. And considering that you wrote this an a drug-induced stage - by the way, don't do drugs - ...
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: My Art "Lucifer and the Duck"
Oh! I really like this! The sun on the water is awesome, and so are the ripples. However, I don't like the duck, the candy cane and the plant/flower thing. ...
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: Just thought that I'd post some neat photography I took.
*gaspness* Monki, you're very pretty! And lol, my friends are crazy too. :P
Dec 21, 2007 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
9/10 Awesome, but for some reason I think it would sound better with 'And' in front of it.
Dec 20, 2007