Wolf

White

Tight

Mite

Er...what's your question?

Slight

Blight

Indeed, I have. Are oranges orange?

MadHatter -- What are you trying to achieve with this? Since you quarreled with Gwen, all you've written is pretty lame stuff. I'm sorry to say, but this is pointless ...

H: H istorical Fiction! (Even though I hate it)

This is what I have so far for my story. I desperately need help, and...yeah. I know it's short but I wanted to make sure that there's nothing majorly wrong ...

Thanks! I just realized what a strange topic this is, because you don't know anything about my story. :lol: I'm actually starting it right now, but it's slow going.

Ok, I've had the idea of my story since 3rd grade. Yeah, I started it then. I hate folders full of old writing, but I don't like any of it ...

The Shadowy figure dashed with lightning speed straight at her, she screamed and was thrown back with such a force that she hit he head hard against the corner of ...

Where is it? Ah, it's a download. Why, though? Usually, people only have those in the 'Advanced Critiques' forum. Well...I was going to critique it, but the download won't work. ...

Yeah...umm, where is your opening exactly? All I see is 'Hope you enjoy my opening'. If you only submitted that, then you should click 'Edit' and include your actual story. ...