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Eh...I just realized that there's a revised edition. >.< I started this critique a couple days back, but I [was] grounded so I didn't get the chance to finish. I'm ...

Rule Three- You HAVE to be 14, unless you've been kept down or put up, alright? But...you are 13. And I'm 12 - so I can't join? :?

Broadwaygirl -- For the sake of not repeating myself, look at my critique for 'Someone'. Here you have the same basic issues, except for the nit-picks. Punctuation. Grammar. Capitalize your ...

Eh...Fan, you seem ti have answered mine. Shall I answer both Razor's and yours? (Ayra) 1. What's his/her biggest pet peeve? Waking up early and when people call her 'dear' ...

Broadwaygirl -- Is it you, Emily? From 73? It's Camille! :) If you're not who I think you are...heh, sorry. Anyways, onto my critique. At the moment, this is a ...

Bond Spirits? That sounds really cool. :) (Guinevere) 1. She has a fiery temperament, and behaves fiercely towards enemies. However, as Ayra's best friend, she does her best to keep ...

Phoebe -- (Neat name, by the way) Echo to Cade - this is lovely, but at the moment it seems to be separated into chunks, and I can't seem to ...

Skye -- This is very confusing. First you are talking about sidewalks, and then you go off in all these different directions and leave the sidewalks behind. I was kind ...

Rtas - there's no point in me reviewing this because I'd just repeat what you've already heard. But I'm really sorry for my earlier comments...I sounded sooo mean. Don't take ...

1) Oh yes. Probably more than your average 14 year-old girl. I couldn't list them all...she doesn't murder for fun. Most of her crimes were commited in order to save ...

Wow, Nate - that one about the rising sun made me want to gag. >.< I am a girl.

It sounds like something funny, but I get the feeling that it would be one of those adult books that actually doesn't have much to do with squirrels. Echo

Wow, awesome. Here's one of mine: I wish I had the dedication to do what your doing, Heather. You rock!

Oh! I answered Fan's questions...whoops. I'll answer yours Vernon, but I'm not going to come up with a new set of questions 'cause I already did. 1. No way. In ...

(Ayra) 1. Her Second Nature (which is a Niranian Wolf), because without it she would be a demon. If that makes sense. :lol: 2. Several things. One of the most ...