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Re: Reviews by Carlito :)
Other Fiction, PG-13. ^^; Thanks!
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
That's pretty intriguing; I want to know more. But for some reason, sentences which have the main character's full name in them usually bother me. :s What do you fear ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
Skye: probably flick it away, but i'm always scared that when i do that they can cling to my fingers. Ayra: let it pass. Are you currently in a relationship? ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Prologue of my story
Hey :) I have to admit to not reading the critiques you've gotten so far as my dad wants to use the computer in ten minutes, so sorry if I ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: flesh : part one.
Thanks guys! Your reviews were great. :) I've fixed the little things and will be revising the middle section again to try to give it more relevance to the story. ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Disney Doodles
Hey! :) These are great! You're really good at drawing. :] I'm not sure how much help I can be here, but I'll give you my opinion about each piece. ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: I have 4 grand to spend
I say you split it. Put 2 grand aside for college and take the rest and go impulse-shopping. Literally buy anything that catches your attention - I've always wanted to ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!
Hey, congrats on the feature! What with all these reviews you've been doing, you definitely deserve it. :) ... and you'd deserve it even more if you reviewed the following: ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Rosa never swims with me.
Hey! :) They found her face down in the water, peaceful as can be, but none the less, I found a dress as black as black can be. You use ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: The Box
Hey! I haven't read anything of yours for a while; I'm looking forwards to this. :) The stairs creak, complaining loudly as I step up the narrow staircase. Hmmm ... ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Jace & Clary, 2 ghosts, and an Angel
Hey, I've read those boks two and I thought the first one was very pretty - the models are gorgeous, almost exactly how I imagined Jace and Clary as I ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: I give out reviews
flesh : part one. :) kind of a gross/weird story, but hey, if you really want to review so badly... ;] it's in other fiction. thanks!
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: flesh : part one.
*** What do you fear the most? Before, I would have written ‘fear itself’, if I wanted to sound smart, you know, quoting someone important. Or, if I was feeling ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Well, hello there
Yeah, I'm pretty sure it is. If it isn't, well, a lot of members are in trouble then. >:D Me included. A lot of people use them; just don't use ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Well, hello there
Hey! :D So, uh ... welcome to YWS? it's a great site, really. i have to admit i haven't been on much these past few months, but i'm trying to ...
Jul 5, 2009
