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Sam -- I don't think this is a bad poem, but its just not my cuppa' tea. It's very simple, and I would like more imagery...although that would be kind ...

canislupus -- Wow! This is spectacular! Amazing work. Well, I here's my two cents: :P I shake back my mane of dark brown hair, and kick my feet in the ...

Sorry it took me so long - I was just un-grounded. :P Ding! You should probably put that in italics, seeing as its a noise. I spread some butter on ...

*Muahaha* Now that I've been un-grounded, I can catch up with you on this. Which I could do, I reminded myself, If I was a werecat. No capital I in ...

cat4prowl -- Sorry I've been so behind - being grounded had me crippled. :P The crowd was rippling with anticipation, seeming to swell with impatience, all around me, excited voices ...

Thanks for the crit! :D Yeah, I'm not sure which kind of poetry this is. Heck, I don't even know if this is poetry. :lol: (I'll fix the quotes, lol.) ...

Yeah, ditto on that. Edward is such a _______.

Azila -- Wow, this is quite a bit longer than your usual flash-fiction! Anyways. I'm too lazy to read two pages of crits, so forgive me if I repeat what ...

No, the trees weren't even blue! xD

*Laughs hysterically* It's obviously that Tanith Lee (the author) has never been to YWS. The book's called 'The Claidi Journals' and it's full of other ridiculous sentences. And it's published!

Yeah, here's the second bit. I was writing it before I received feedback on Part one, so there's probably the same mistakes. Any ways, here it is. I know it's ...

Wow, thanks for the crit! I really appreciate how you actually gave example from books and such for support. That was immensely helpful - I'll work on the ABA/AAB pattern ...

:D Yeah, you mentioned that you hated it. :oops: But I reviewed it nonetheless because it was the only piece that I felt I could actually say something constructive for... ...

This sentence was on a book I just read: The trees rested like soft, dark blue clouds and tapering , pale, dark towers, asleep. What is that if not ridiculous? ...

Azila Dear -- How could I not read it? First of all, it's written by you, which guarantees that it will be nothing short of amazing. Secondly, it's Fantasy. I ...