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Re: Chapter 1 - Part 1
Thanks Azila! :D *le glomps* I've decided that I am going to use this as the beginning of my story, so now....on to the editing! *sinister playing of the piano* ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: This is the Raven's Halloween
Oh wow, this is very long. I may only be able to do half. >.< I’ll share this with you, I offered. Cú, the King's old wolfhound, gave me a ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Wild Heart chap 1 part 2
The Trout River was a small bridge that was built across a seasonal stream. The Trout river is a small bridge?! However, it did house a large amount of fish ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: The YWS Yearbook '07
Oh man. This is going to be edited, like, a gazillion times. *takes a deep breath* Here goes! I haven't been on YWS for very long, actually. But now, 67 ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: The YWS Yearbook '07
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Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Ridiculous sentence
*sharpens teeth * Let's get her, Razor. :lol:
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Gwen vs. Ayra (Poll)
Lol, who's Pat Buchanan? I've seen that name before on YWS...*scratches head*
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Struggling to come up with a title ( prologue)
Extraterrestial -- If I were you, I wouldn't be starting a separate story, seeing as your 'Night Walkers' is chock-full of mistakes. I'm not trying to sound mean, but before ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Gwen vs. Ayra (Poll)
Yes! Is Gwenevire better than Ayra? Or is Ayra better than Gwenevire? Yeah, this is completely random, but I'm bored. :lol:
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Rain Dancers
Riedawriter23 -- This is beautiful. Your imagery is fantastic, and this a lovely and original theme. I agree with JasmineHart that the second line is a bit too strong, though. ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Unvanquishable Foe -- for Fangala's contest
Azila -- I'm sure you'll do well in the contest; this is extremely good. I love the borderline humour and how you wrote it from a cat's perspective. I am ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Vivian
I'm determined to review everything of yours, Azila! :lol: She opens her eyes. She stands. These sound choppy compared to the fluid eloquence displayed in the rest of the piece. ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Songwood
Seraph! It's been a while since I reviewed anything of yours, but I've been meaning to review this for weeks. I would have gotten around to it earlier but for ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: The Night Walkers chapter one
In the future, please don't use attachments for your work, okay? :wink: But I got the download to work, so here's your critique: The ghostly moon shone brightly in the ...
Dec 31, 2007 -
Re: Cruel to be Kind
mine were the hands that held you down, that drowned you in a sea of night – [Comment 1] mine were the hands that held you close, and let them ...
Dec 31, 2007