Wolf

Wolf! Loyal, fierce, all that. It would be the perfect daemon for me! ...and of course if I could be an animal, I'd be a wolf too. xD

It's about time I critiqued this! It's a wee bit long, so I'll do it in fragments. First up: prologue! My anger festering, with every true love's kiss. That sounds ...

Hey Summer! You do sound like an interesting person! And Raven is an awesome name - If my name was Raven, I'd run around yelling, 'I've gotta cooler name than ...

gothgirl01 -- (Prepare for a very harsh review) I was wincing as I read this. Grammar has been pointed out, and spelling, but the poem in general is just not ...

Thanks! It does help! Yes...I've printed out parts one and two of Ch. 1 and I've been editing them, adding more of her background and appearance and motives for her ...

Thank-you so much! :D I'll definitely fix those things - I've decided to edit this piece to perfection. Or as close as I can get to perfection, anyways. :lol: Now ...

Okay, I really need a name for a race in my fantasy story. I've tried 'Miokoda' but that sounds like a race of giant kitty-cats. Which isn't really what I ...

Hey, don't leave! Yeah, writing and chatting are two different things, but that sounds pretty thick coming from someone who can't even be bothered to use proper grammar. That sounded ...

Lol, that was awesome. I love your word choices and wait - Dono? As in Hunter? :lol: Anyways, this is really short (short but sweet) so I really have nothing ...

Thanks Alainna! :D Yeah, I think I'll scrap that first paragraph, or at least re-write it. And I'll fix those phrases too. ^_^ Cheers, Camille

Awesome thread, Meep! 1) Get published to a magazine. I've already sent in my submission. 2) Have half of my novel written and edited. Stop procrastinating! 3) 500 reviews. Get ...

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Two snow-white children silent in the brisk of autumn. I'm not sure about the 'snow-white' description. It's rather cliched, so maybe you could say something else to suggest that they ...

I have a battered old copy of 'The adventures of Huckleberry Finn' from 1969, and I think it's been owned by about 5 schools, judging by all the stamps and ...

Thanks Squallz! :D Man, I should really go review something of yours! I owe you for all the times you've reviewed my work. Anyways, I will [try to] explain her ...