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arch angel -- Not bad, but not exactly good either. But don't despair! You have every means to make it good! Here are those means: • A library/Bookstore. I'm sure ...

Terrible. If you can't see the forest for from the inside of your navel don't write poetry. I'm afraid that I agree with smorgish here. This is...not very good. I ...

Ok, I edited this a little. I've fixed the tense issues, but I've decided to keep the 'green trees white snow red blood!' line the way it is because it ...

w00tums! February it is! I'll start racking my brains for a new was a horrible idea to name my account after the main character in my novel. >.

David and he spent their whole life together. Since they were twins it was difficult for the system to put each of them in separate foster homes. They began in ...

NIT-PICKS: I see a girl running in the night, from what, is unknown. I think this sentence would be better as: I see a girl running in the night, but ...

This is going to take me a loooong time to critique, but I will soldier through! The fire began to die down as the woman threw water from the ocean ...

I'm reading Fell, by David Clement-Davies. I'm also re-reading The adventures of Huckleberry Fin. (By Mark Twain.) And...yep, that's it. I just finished City of Bones, and I LOVED it.

Crying Rain -- This is okay. You have some basic imagery, but nothing special. Nothing complex. There is emotion, and that's good. But the emotion pales in comparison to the ...

Aw, thanks Suzanne! :) And *squeals* I just saw Sachiko's puppy! I want it! *steals the puppy and runs away laughing hysterically* I should post some pics of my dog...she ...

Hmm well, I am assuming it is your first draft of your novel? The only advice I can have is to spend several years editing, haha. Honestly though, your first ...

:oops: Maybe I should post a photo of myself here...but I'm so ugly...I'd ruin everything! Oh well. Not everyone can be pretty! *evil laughter* This is me in the morning. ...

Yeah, you're probably right about that. ^_~ BUt all the same, I couldnn't help but feel a little shocked. So, has anyone else read anything of Twain's?

Yeah, 'failing horribly' is pretty accurate. I get what she meant - kind of - but its horribly purple and not very well-worded. >.< But personally, I find it very ...

I will! :) And putting it in italics is an awesome idea! I'll definitely do that.