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Re: What is the member above you known for?
Known for knowing MadHatter and known for being phantas-whatever it's called. :P
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: In the Land of the Purple Monkeys
SirWozzell -- I haven't got time to critique now, but I will make an effort to come back to this later if it hasn't received any [good] critiques by then. ...
Jan 24, 2008 -
Re: DoaV (1st version) : Chapter One
“Mommy!” The child whimpered, knowing her mother was dead. Hhmm... Meh. Maybe you should do: "Mommy," the child whimpered. The black demon had...(etc) It's just that using an exclamation point ...
Jan 24, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
Lol Snoink, those are awesome pics!
Jan 24, 2008 -
Re: Just Close you eyes
Hey there! :) I can see you're new to YWS. Just so you know, you shouldn't post more than once a day, because it clogs up the forums with your ...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Goodbye forever
*sigh* Umm... Firstly, you've posted a lot of your "work" here on YWS and for every piece you submit, you need to do at least two critiques. There's 16 things ...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
9/10 Very philosophical. :P
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
6/10 I'm not much of a Star-Wars fan. ^_~
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
7/10 ...weird...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Morning on Lookout Mountain ::UPDATED::
Yay! You posted more. :) The moose is awesome - I love moose - but the angle seemed a teensy bit lopsided, but it might just be me. xD The ...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Rate the USER above you!
Username: 85% Avatar: 75% (Cute, but I don't like the plain background) Custom title: 65% Country: 100% (Poetic-ness!) Signature: 50% (The link didn't work...) Overall: 82%
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Moonlight Seagull: Chaper Five No no romeo
:twisted: Harsh review comin' right up! I have to say that I'm a little disappointed, ning. What started of as a very fun and promising story...well, you get the point. ...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Camille!
Hey Canis! Or lupus, or whatever you want me to call you. =p Do you like fencing? YES! ...yes, I do. *clears throat nervously* I've actually never tried it before ...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Sidestepping Mary Sewage
I only realize now what a dumb thing it was to make my username here on YWS the same as my main character's name....but I swear, I'm not a Mary-Sue. ...
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: Midnight
Wow, this is really powerful! Usually I dislike pieces written in 2nd person, but I think it helped here to convey the emotion and I just...liked it. :P Now, on ...
Jan 21, 2008
