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Thank-you all so much! :D I didn't think my topic would get this much attention, but I'm overjoyed that it did! Gwenevire >> Why does everyone always compare everything to ...

Actually, you can start a sentence with 'and'. :wink: I find it can be very powerful is used correctly, and in this case, it is. Some people use it for ...

Hi Louisa, and welcome to YWS! :D It's an amazing site, and if you like writing, I'm sure you'll love it! I myself have become rather [s]addicted[/s]engrossed in it. My ...

I don't think there are many Japanese people here, but while were at it; I would like a french pen pal. :) Firearris :) I'm French! And I've always wanted ...

The B button? Like on your keyboard? :? The only weird thing I noticed is that when I click on an emoticon (in PMing) then it doesn't show up. I ...

What do you mean, exactly? *scratches head* Like how not to write a clichéd cat story? I'm not sure. If you have an idea that seems too predictable, or it ...

Bla, you guys are both right. I've scrapped my beginning, but I might keep the dream she has for later... hehe, I kind of like it. She's standing knee-deep in ...

.:UPDATE:. I wrote a beginning last night. It starts with her weird dream, and then the wakes up feeling feverish with cramps and everything, and that's as far as I've ...

That is indeed spiffy! Thanks for the suggestion, BBB! I really like that idea - I think I'll keep the poll for a while longer though, to get more opinions ...

Hey tania! This is an interesting start to a poem, but there are some issues: - Clichés: It's become very un-original to write about depending on someone to live, methinks. ...

So I've had this idea for a novel since, like, third grade, But every time I try to start it, I get Writer's Block. >.< So this is where you ...

*lol* P.s. Your custom title is sooo awesome! Distorting famous quotes is great fun. :P

Thanks, BBB! :D I'll go fix those things right away! ... and posting more on 'Need a crit?' won't be any trouble! xD Cheers, Camille

I don't really know... I don't think you should torture your characters too often, or make them picked on more than any others, because that seems kind of clichéd... but ...

Wow, that was very pretty! :) That flicker of knowing before the night That crushed-on-the-inside sigh The last line there is a little wordy... but I'm no poetry expert, so ...