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Wow Keek, you get reviews fast! *jealous* Anyways, sorry I'm so late. >.< I meant to crit earlier, but I've been busy... well, as the other critiquers have covered, like, ...

Hehe, that sounds like fun! :) I love writing flashbacks. This is just the first part. There's a second, in which Isaria is asking Guinevere to go and enroll as ...

Firstly, why bold it? But that aside, here's a critique for you: Deep breathe now. Huh? Did you mean: Deep breaths, now. My answer to you is no, and you ...

I don't owe you any more critiques, but I wanted to find out what happens to Emily. :) I have to say that I'm kind of disappointed. Her dad just ...

Thank-you! :D Don't worry, the style is only for the prologue. And maybe some flashbacks, but I'm not sure.

Thanks so much, Keek! (Is that your real name? I love it!) I don't know exactly what my problems are for characterization -- once I post the first chapter, I'll ...

Cool idea, Keek! :D Hm... it makes me think of: A young girl, maybe thirteen or fourteen, splayed out on damp stone. Her skin is pale, and she is asleep, ...

I know I have already made a thread for the 'nameless novel', but now that I've actually started writing it from the beginning, I figured a new one wouldn't hurt. ...

Hey, I didn't know you could draw! This is pretty good, actually. I love the staff, and she is very cute, in an anime-ish kinda way. These are the things ...

Hey Azila! :D Just so you know, I started this critique a while ago and so I might repeat some things -- my apologies if I do... Tiny snow flakes ...

>> Critique three of three >> Hey Jared! Sorry it's taken me so long to crit this, but I've been swamped. First entry: This entry is good, but I don't ...

Alphess - part 1? You don't have to, seeing as you're buried neck-deep in critiques now, but... *hopeful*

*glomps* Thanks so much, Andy! That was a really helpful critique. :) If you are planning on rewriting this (which I hope you do), I suggest that you focus more ...

Wow, err... *dies of a laughing fit* *gasping for breath* I have returned from the dead to give you this critique! [quote] “Milkman!” He turned round, to see a tall ...

Thanks Aedomir! I do see what you mean about it being cliché. >.< I'm not sure what to do about it, though. Anyways. Do you think I should continue this? ...