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Clearly your absence hasn't had a negative effect on your writing abilities! I loved reading that - it was wonderful. Now for some nit picks ... I just skimmed your ...

Rated for some language. This has been my brainchild since I was 8 years old. I've started writing it countless times but never really got past chapter three - until ...

Overall this is good, I especially like the hair. The only things I noticed were that the person on the right's chin looks a bit off somehow ... maybe too ...

It is midday. I am walking down the street, my hands in my pockets and my head down. This isn't really a very interesting first sentence. "It is midday" helps ...

Over the past year I've gotten really interested in photography, but only had a crappy digital to use. However, my parents recently bought a Canon Powershot G12 HD camera so ...

The first drawing: I like it, but I think it looks a bit messy. I don't know whether this is intentional or not, but it comes off as sort of ...

Got my braces off last thursday! :)

Rough draft. Rated for language and content that may cause discomfort. __________________________________ We slam the bathroom door and spin to a collapse on the tiles. It is no longer me ...

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thanks, i really appreciate your review. (: that's funny, i just recently started guitar lessons (about two months ago). i see what you mean about seeing your own limitations ... ...

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wow, thanks everyone *is surprised* that sort of made my day? xX_white_shadow_Xx: haha, look who's talking ;) that's some pretty amazing lipstick, where did you get it?!

Aww thanks guys :smt032

Hey :) I think this is a good base for a poem, but not actually a poem yet. Does that make sense? :s You have all these emotions, which is ...

Hahaha, cute baby. :) Sorry for the brightness; my friend's camera is really weird. But here you go.