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I'm glad it helped. :D The example? Sure, you can use it! I don't mind. And she's naked? *dies* Oh well, I suppose that's alright as long as you don't ...

Hey ning! :D I'm here too late, as usual. But that won't deter me from trying to help you with characterization. I struggle with it too. It is incredibly difficult, ...

First photo: I LOVE this one! It looks like the sky is bruised -- very cool. I like how the tree's branches are kind of feathery and dark. :) Second ...

Many thanks to you both! :D Ning >> thanks! I'll change those things in my rewrite. =) RedWing >> you're right, I should change that. Thanks for your comments! Cheers, ...

Phew! I was worried about that! Actually, I had my dad send you an e-mail giving me permission to access YWS as I'm under 13. Just wondering, but did you ...

Hey! :D I did promise to review this, so I will. I'll do it paragraph-by-paragraph. PARAGRAPH #1: The sun dropped down, and the world was plunged in darkness. The New ...

Hehe, thanks Aedomir! :D Progress: - Done some basic character sketches (I'm not much of an artist, but 'twas fun) - Written a few experimental pieces using the extended metaphor ...

Fangala! :D First of all, let me say that I love this. It's so... excellent. The rhyming scheme is AMAZING! They take you for status, I assume. Hierarchy dictates a ...

You had surgery? =( What ever for? (You don't have to tell me if it's personal -- I'm just annoyingly curious.) And lol, I've always wanted to [s]shoot by brother[/s] ...

Hey Keek! So you want to be an Instructor, eh? Well, I'm fairly new myself, but here's what I think makes a good review: Always point out what you like ...

Ack! I am so late in reviewing this. :oops: I feel really bad, mainly because my critique probably won't be of much help, but I want to comment anyways. And ...

Hi Phebe. You asked me to review this, so here I am. He stood there, wind blowing faintly in his face, while he stood there admiring her perfect features: deep ...

Hey there! :D Birds flew out of the trees, disturbed by the world below. I don't like this as an opening sentence, to be honest. What exactly disturbed them in ...

Thanks! That article really helped. :) Snoink is so smart! Anyways, here's my progress: - I have started to research the extended metaphor, and it looks great. - I am ...

Sounds great! =] So far, I like the revision more. And character rants sound really awesome -- they also sound like a great idea for characterization -- and I'm sure ...