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Hi! :D Once upon a time there was a girl. She got perfect grades, had the perfect body and the perfect life completely. I like these as opening sentences; you ...

Hey Heather! :) The moonlight trickled through the thick, grimy atmosphere and alighted upon the cobblestone road where a young boy sat amidst the fragments of glass from a half ...

So sorry I haven't reviewed these yet, but I've been away. I'll start now, though!

Thanks so much, Heather! :D Your suggestions for characterization really helped. I will be working on this more before moving on two part two, and I'll fix the nit-picks as ...

Great! :) I'm going up to the country today, but I'll be back in time to get those critiques done for you guys.

Wednesday Mach the 11th, 2008 Okay. So, I've decided to re-write my prologue. As in, completely different ideas. Except for the first part, the bit in italics. Si far, I ...

Sounds interesting, but I get the feeling that it isn't about whisky. *is brain-dead* Starlit

Sounds like that series by Gordan Korman. Maybe about, like, a tribe of island natives or a bunch of kids who get marooned on an island? Wolves against a white ...

(Okay. This is an edit of my original post. In the original, I had a goal: to get a third blue star. Now, I simply want to review.) What I ...

Suz! *glompattacks* You are sooo pretty! And you're reading. Reading ROCKS. And the colour of your wall = awesomeness.

Hi lupis! :) From my perch on the dock, my eyes explore the dark emerald green water. This should be hyphenated, methinks. And maybe a comma after 'dark'? My gaze ...

Hey Razor! :D I had a nice long critique for you, but when I tried to post it, I was suddenly logged off and I lost my review! >.< So, ...

YES! :D Zills: thanks so much! That actually was a long review, I think. And helpful. I see what you mean about characterization and I'll just do a little more ...

Ha! Now I will have reviewed everything in your portfolio! *cackles madly* A floor-length turquoise cloak and bright purple hat on the hat stand outside the kitchen announced the presence ...

I'm here for chapter two! :D ... scratch that. I saw the under construction' thing when I came back to finish this... (it was saved as a draft). So, this ...