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Thanks. :) Ha, I look ridiculously serious in that picture. XP Usually I'm not so... solemn looking, lol. Anyway -- yeah, it's a tattoo. Some kid I was baby-sitting wanted ...

Come on people, I need more critiquing material! I've done so far: -- A moonlit stroll -- Diary, EDITED -- The Reason (part one) -- HarborVille Prologue -- All Eyes ...

Hey Jenna! =) Sorry it's taken me so long to get around to this. :oops: His light footsteps sounded on the stairs, before he came into view, with one hand ...

"Robinson Crusoe" by Daniel Defoe, "City of Bones" by Cassandra Clare, and I finished "The Diary of a Young Girl" by Otto H. Frank. City of Bones! I love that ...

Hey BBB! :D It was the photo album of my parent’s wedding. Should be: parents' wedding. ‘My dearest Tamera, Why have you stopped searching? Love can be found in the ...

Hey Ginger! :) “Are you sure you’re going to be okay? Do you want me to come with you, I don’t mind?” The second sentence here doesn't sound right... I ...

Hey Aedomir! Aedomir had claimed some venison, making but a sport of the game chase, and between them, new energy struck. I don't think you're a Mary-Sue, but here it ...

Thanks so much lupis! =) I'm glad you like the edited version better. Hopefully, you'll like the extra-edited version even more! XP Anyway, thanks for the suggestions. I do have ...

So I promised, so I critique! And do forgive me if I repeat what has been said before -- I have limited time online today, so I didn't read all ...

You ask, I critique! :D I climb up the three steps, my bag weighing down on my shoulders. I reach the top and pause, turning to look down the aisle ...

LOL! :lol: Hamish is sooo cute! And so funny. The only two negative things I noticed are: the photo is kind of on a slant, and the YWS logo in ...

=) “Pull ‘em up, ‘arry!” Thompson shouted roughly . His long, gray beard was becoming soaked by the heavy rain that was pouring down into his fishing boat. He yanked ...

Thanks Jared, Jenna, and Keek! I'm going to start with Harborville Prologue, and hopefully I'll get it done -- that's assuming that my mom doesn't come up and disturb my ...

Okay, thanks! :) So far, I've done: A moonlit stroll; Diary, EDITED; and The Reason (part 1). Next up: HarborVille Prologue; Reality; The Broken - Chapter One. And then Aedomir's ...

:D I am here to critique! [quote] [s]“Ariana why are you so sad,” her mom said as Ariana pressed against the window of the car, “this will be a new ...