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Gwen -- First pic: lol,I'm like spazzing. Heh. Second pic: ning! You're gorgeous! *faints* You should show that to Taylor. Did you get your hair straightened, too? Or is it ...

Thanks so much, Heather! :) Your tips on characterization really help. I'll keep them in mind as I rewrite! Cheers, Camille xx PS. Sorry the nit-picks haven't been fixed yet; ...

Thanks so much, everyone! :D Saint: *glomps* I really appreciate you taking the time to critique this even though you don't usually for fantasy. All your suggestions and nit-picks will ...

Cool storybook! Is it too late to join, or no?

No grammar editing? Aww... But I just have to point out this: There was a letter placed on the grand piano. I don't like this as an opening sentence, mainly ...

Awesome, thanks Aedomir! I just finished Kidnapped Chapter One so now I'll do Pianissimo. :)

Hey Keek! I tried to do a full-edit here, but my scanner broke down and I only got the first three pages. =_= And even those are bad-quality, I think. ...

Sorry I'm a little behind... my mom needs to use he computer now (I think) but I'll start critiquing Kidnapped Chapter One as soon as she's done. And then I'll ...

Thank-you all, those were really great critiques! =) I see what you mean as it being cliché and everything, and I'm going to do something about that. I'll be PMing ...

Awesome! There seems to be a lot of these threads kicking around. ... not that I object, though -- I love shameless advertising. =P > Alphess: part one > Prologue ...

> NN -- Prologue: Black Water, Red Flame :D

> NN -- Prologue: Black Water, Red Flame Thanks so much! :D

> NN -- Prologue: Black Water, Red flame It's very rough. Heh. Thanks! =)

Hey guys! Some of you may have read the original 'NN -- Prologue'. Well, this is a rewrite. It's a lot different, and it takes place four years before the ...

We all fall down I'd be really appreciative if you could take a look at that. It's kind of random and has a lot of out-there metaphors, so if you ...