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In my portfolio, 'Alphess: part one' and 'NN -- Prologue: Dark water, Pale flame' need your love! :) Thanks!

I'm here, as promised! :) ... but since I'm short on time, I didn't read everyone else's critiques. So I may repeat things -- but you'll be getting my fabulous ...

And page two! I. DESCRIPTIONS You have all these adjectives but they don't really contribute to the writing in any way. They're just kind of annoying to read and they ...

I'm in a tearing hurry -- parents could be home any minute -- but I'll post page 2 ASAP.

I'm here, as promised! :) ... but since I'm short on time, I didn't read everyone else's critiques. So I may repeat things -- but you'll be getting my fabulous ...

So would I.

Right, I'll tell you: The teacher (my HR teacher) phoned my parents to tell them that I started laughing uncontrollably at a photo in the Guinness book of world records. ...

*dies of laughter* Um.. I'm sorry. *shifty eyes* How terrible.

Ah. Yes, thank-you Razor. :P

I've been grounded until the end of the school year. :cry: I might be able to sneak on at school, but not for very long. >.< I'll miss you all!

Thanks, Gwen. -.- And Fire > I will sneak on!

THREE MONTHS WITHOUT YWS?! Yep, that's right. I've been grounded -- don't ask -- and I will only be un-grounded once school is over. My apologies to anyone who I've ...

Cool! It looks fantastic. ^.^

Hey KJ! I promised I'd critique this, but I haven't started to yet. Homework (not to mention the pile of reviews-to-do I have) has me pretty bogged down for now, ...