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6/10 Kinda weird... is it too long to finish with a *?

I don't have time for a critique, but there's some things you should know about YWS... You know? Like dang I thought purple was the most wonderful color, and so ...

*claps for... a week* That was so... incredible, Sam! Really refreshing and well-written, enviably so. I'm afraid that this critique won't be too helpful, but I'll try... Some points for ...

Hey, Monki! :) First of, let me say that I have to agree with Cade and Suzanne. This is just a diary entry, really, but I think you have the ...

:shock: Wow, I'm getting a ton of reviews! Squee! aestar101 > added to the list. LolitaRose > yus! I'm so glad that you think she's "an average girl, but something ...

This thread seems pretty dead... ... it's time I brought it back to life! :twisted: (RUNAWAY) Chapter One: paralyzed [Part One] Thanks Aedomir! :D - Camille xx

Revamped! w00t-w00t! I edited the original post, and I am once again open for business. :)

My favourite is #3; it looks sponged on. Very cool. ^^ I agree with Azila that this is a good, clean start. At this stage, it's easy to add things ...

Yay! Your crits are awesome, Sam. :D (RUNAWAY) Chapter One It's 'Other Fiction' right now, but it's really a romance story, I guess. Just not so much in the first ...

I'd love a critique! :D (RUNAWAY) Chapter One: paralyzed It's 'Other Fiction', so let me know if you don't want to critique it, mkay? Thanks, Camille xx PS. Congrats on ...

Muchas gracias to all three of you! :D Cool beginning, but part of me is looking out for the cliches that I think are coming next. Here's hoping my search ...

Please crit! Thanks Alainna! =)

Chapter One[/url] :D Thanks!

Awesome! Crit me! There's some fodder for you. :P

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