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I think it's safe to assume that I'm not the only one who occasionally struggles with creating realistic, well-developed characters. ;) Well, I was thinking this morning about how it's ...

My goal is to do at least 2 reviews per day, and I thought you guys could help me out. ;) What I will review: • Fantasy short stories (my ...

I'd really appreciate if you could check out either the first or chapter of my novel :) It's fantasy. Chapter 1 - Chapter 2 - Thank you in advance!

(I'd suggest reading the first chapter first.) Once again, I'm sorry for any formatting errors! _______________________________________________________ Chapter two: She kicked as hard as she could in

Part Two! GENERAL COMMENTS: 1. I've noticed you repeatedly make the same grammar mistake with your dialogue. For example: [Incorrect] "Hello." He said. [Correct] "Hello," he said. 2. More on ...

Shrubbery - aww, thank you :3 I'm so jealous of you guys for looking good in glasses! I had them but they ... didn't work out, so I walked around ...

Thank you all so much for your reviews! :D I'll fix the nit-picky things right away and then get to work on adding more characterization and more description of time ...

And run his hands throughout my hair. For some reason, I feel like this would flow a lot better if It were "through my hair" instead of throughout. Just a ...

Here to review as promised! :) Starting with nit picks ... I didn’t understand; it was Saturday afternoon, and no one went to school or worked after noon on Saturday. ...

You're too kind! :$

I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, but I'll try my best ... and ran a figurative cup round the (rib)cage’s bars, I don't really understand this bit about the ...

First, grammar & nit picks ... “Nope, totally legit. Only the handle; the rest of the luggage was nowhere near.” I said. There should be a comma after 'near'. Either ...

I apologize in advance for my useless review - this is pretty much perfect. :D The only things I noticed were that the adult cheetah's forelegs seem to be at ...

I don't know if the messy formatting was on purpose or not, but if it wasn't, I agree with the previous two reviewers - it would flow a lot better ...

Could you please take a look at this? :) It's Fantasy, & the first chapter of a novel. Thank you in advance!