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..The cracks and groans of breaking sea ice echoed eerily in the night. Ayra shifted restlessly, her eyeslashes fluttering feverishly as she dreamed. The crude cotton blanket was rough against ...

Ok, ok! :} Sorry if I sound defensive, but I'm actually only 12 and also, I joined this site yesterday. But thanks for the advice! ^^ [edit 1] Sorry if ...

The writing is good, but you made a really short post. Also, maybe you want to try using more descriptive language?

hhmm..that may not have been long enough :( Sorry! [edit 1] Ok, I'll settle down and wait until someone else posts... I guess I'll check out the Fantasy/Fiction stuff. See ...

...Wide-eyed with fear, the two elven girls stared at the slowly advancing ice-berg. It's rumbling course shook the floor of the ship and sent tremors scurrying up the timbers. Suddenly ...

Ok, thanks :) I'll keep what you said in mind and make my posts longer...well, I think I'll add some more now! :)

Whoops, I was typing to fast :( I meant to say 'accept'

I agree with them...:P I'm new to this site...can anyone tell me how to view my friends and acept friend requests?

I'm going to continue it, what do you think? [edit 1] Ok, well, I'll just continue it now... No, on second thought, I won't. I'm going to wait for some ...

Silent footsteps heralded Guinevere's arrival, and Ayra turned slowly, her eyes questioning. "The ice..." she trailed off, lost in thought. "I know." her friend stated simply. There was a strange, ...

Hi! I' didn't want to post to much, because I had limited time on the computer. I'm going to post more now :) Hey, do you know how I can ...

Wow, thanks! :) You're right about the choppiness, I noticed that when I re-read it..mangoes! Is that how you spell mangoes? Whatever. I'll write more...when I'm not at school and ...

Hey, thanks guys :) I like this site already! Oh, and ... how do I see my reviews?

hhmm...what are reviews? I have 16 of them? That's odd. I don't recall anyone ever saying anything about my writing, and that was once...oh well. I'm off to the other ...

Wow...I've got 20 posts! I did a couple of posts see what people thought of my writing...you answered :) If anyone else ever looks at these boards, I wonder what ...