Wolf

I agree :D The first one does sound like it is saying that a novel is a long, drawn-out version of a story. The second one is better.

Oh. :oops: Well, I'll just go and review some stuff...:roll: I didn't think of it being cliche..I just thought one night that maybe I should make the scene where she ...

Ouch. Lay off, will you? I'm only 12! I mean, I appreciate your review, but don't you have any constructive critisism? Anything that you liked about it? I'm sorry if ...

Thanks! I'll just go edit some things ^^ P.s.- I adore running at night too!

How, why and when do you increase your number of stars? And how, why and when do they change colours? (Some of you have blue and red stars; why?)

Wow, that was spectacular! Really amazing piece of writing. I can't find a single thing wrong with it. I envy you, actually. I'm also 12 but my writing is nowhere ...

I would be a werewolf, but that's because I love wolves. I've read all of the Twilight trilogy, and being a vampire wouldn't be bad, but I am obssessed with ...

It's good, but some sentences don't make sense, like this one... ex: Great beasts with manes of crimson fur and eyes of burning hellfire onwards up the steep and treacherous ...

Good job! A very well-written piece; lots of interesting metaphors and similies. It was well structured, but might I suggest pressing 'Enter' ever once in a while? Maybe it's just ...

Welcome to YWS.. maybe I shouldn't be saying that, since I joined very recenly too! :woops: Well..yeah! Hi!

Nice! But you should do your dialogue like this: “Serves you right! Thanks Garyn!” “No problem!” replied the shaggy grey wolf. Otherwise, it's great! :) >>I love writing about wolves ...

Nice! I think it flows nicely, and I admire your use of descriptive language. Well done!

A scream shattered the night like a pane of glass, sending glittering shards of sound spiraling off into the night. Poised cat-like by the riverbank, Ayra tensed, her muscles pulled ...

Amazing! I think it is very good; colourful language, it flows nicely, and it was quite interesting to read. Keep up the good work! Except, you might want to change ...

I'm sorry, but I have to go. :( My annoying neighbour came over to hog the computer *angry*