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Re: Uberhero Ch3
Nice! I haven't really got anything constructive to say...:oops: But that's because I can't think of anything that needs to be changed. I'm a fan of writing violence scenes myself, ...
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: Approaching Darkness
:oops: Hey, you know you can edit your posts?
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: Approaching Darkness
No problem... I just re-read my reviews; I sound really mean though! :(
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: Approaching Darkness
*roll* I don't mean to be repetitive, but my review will beasically be the same as my review of '.:The Wind:.' IMPORTANT Alot of the sentences should be joined, and ...
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: .:The Wind:.
Yeah, you can RP. But I won't have the time; I'm too busy with my story :( Anyways, we shouldn't be chatting on these forums!
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: .:The Wind:.
No prob Gwen :D Sorry if I sounded parent-ish but people probably aren't going to review your work because the dialogue is all mixed up with the text and it ...
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: .:The Wind:.
A couple more things... You said: A chill of early morning summer sent a wave of pleasure through the villagers of Moonlight Valley. The warm suns glow rimed the treetops ...
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: .:The Wind:.
The ideas are excellent, but the structure is hard to read. You wrote Her icy blue eyes scanned the trees; they moved quickly with ease across the brown-bottomed oaks. --------- ...
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: .:Second Nature:.
Thanks Gwen! :D You should write something so I can review it! Pwease!
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: An extract from book 3 of the Inheritance trilogy
I agree with Kyte! But aren't those characters from Eragon and Eldest? I don't think it will be included in a book, because it is Christopher Paolini's ideas and characters...
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: Phoenix, ch. 1
Short but sweet :D I enjoyed reading that, but I kow next to nothing about your main character. I know only that his tribe is gone and he has red ...
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: .:Second Nature:.
Thanks^^ I was just having a discouraged moment :lol: I mentioned that she was beautiful (more about that in the rest of the book; she's an elf) Alas, I am ...
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: not the darkness that you seek, but the sun that you need
Interesting, I enjoyed reading it...but like Kyte said, what's the point? Is it someone describing the Earth? Something like that? :lol: Sorry if my guesses are way off but...:lol:
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: .:Second Nature:.
No kidding^^ Well...maybe I'm not cut out to be an author? So far; my characters are uninteresting, my magical phenomenons are too "speshul", my scenes are cliche and only one ...
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: Wolf Heart -Chapter (?)
^^ Thanks! This is a part of a chapter in my book...you can see more here:
Oct 28, 2007