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I would suggest adding a few rhyming lines, but, maybe tthat's just me. It doesn't exactly flow, but like your other poetry, it is rough and full of feeling. It ...

I was wondering; how do you change your username?

That sounds really cool! I know I'm only a new member, but if my writing is worthy I would love to participate. But, would there be a certain theme or ...

Not bad; it's rough but full of emotion...beautiful but jagged. Since I'm no poetry expert, I won't be able to give you a good review :oops:

Via, I like that. It's neat and concise...that's how you spell it, right? But it makes me think of trains...lol. 9/10

Great avvie Gwen! I love how you personalized it :)

Thanks! :D I am currently switching it around. :wink: I like yours, it's kind of soothing..8/10

No thanks...I am currently trying to find a suitable avatar...

Cool Gwen! ...

Hey Gwen, great username! XD I give you a 9/10

I changed it...:P

Lol lyrical_sunshine! Love the avvie! A definite 10/10! :D

>>Not bad, Gwen! Before I move on to the nit-picks, I just want to clarify something; aren't you writing the rest of your book in 3rd person? (ex: She climbed ...

Prologue March 12th, 1992 A small baby boy wrapped in a soft, cotton blanket was handed to his mother. "Congradulations! It's a boy!" Exclaimed a bulky doctor. Tears swelled in ...

It's 'Check' I looked at your poem already.