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Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should

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Wild music

Hazel what? Hazel Brown? Anyways: YWS Star yellow

Um...a big black horse!

Lol :lol: Site admin red.

:( Whatever. Hey, what does your signature mean? Are you a snail or somethin'? Wierd. Anyways, I shall give yours a 7/10. It's not very creative, but I dunno. It ...

Quote: yeah, what is it about peer editing in school that makes it a garanteeed downer? yuo'd figure these people would at least know what grammar is... how in the ...

3/10 it's so plain! You should change it back to your Narnia one!

Nice! ^^ Except for some typos, it's fine. You wrote: i will never say it again. i love you. those words thrown and shattered ---------- The 'i''s should be capitalized. ...

You wrote: At the time, Tonk’s hair was long and blonde, her eyes blue. There was a smattering of cute looking freckles across face. Ishtar had not noticed Tonks for ...

:smt051 I decided to write this because I got so many reviews of people asking me about the character's [in my story] backgrounds and all that stuff. So, I typed ...

Sun-melted gold ^^

Banned for decomposing the beautiful moonbeams ^^

Hee that is cute! Me thinks...9/10