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I've always wanted to jump off a cliff, airplane or building- I love the adrenaline, and I like dangerous things. Unfortunately, the hightest point I've ever jumped off is a ...

Wow. That's all I can say...just wow. All in all, that was a very nice bit of writing. A little cliche, but I don't care too much about stuff like ...

hhmm..you've given me alot to think about. I almost popped a blood vessel pondering your questions, but I finally came up with an answer: You're right. However, I have a ...

(My comments are in italics and your writing is in bold ) All was silent. Not the nice silence that makes you feel calm and comforted, but the dark eerie ...

I got to 1740 grains of rice at level 36. It took me so long...does the rice reallly go to people who can't afford it?

I agree with you crewgurl93. I'm sorry I haven't been participating in this conversation as much as I'd like to, but I've been busy. Anyways, it seems like you guys ...

Thanks! I like Paws and Starlit too! You're right; I should change the name or if not, just spell it a little differently.

As always, SeraphTree beat me to it. I agree with all the nit-picks she mentioned, and I can't seem to find anything else that bothered me. I can, however, provide ...

hmm, not bad. I like how it doesn't rhyme (you have no idea how bad some of the rhyming poems are on YWS). By the way, Welcome to YWS! You ...

Well, I've seen so many people with signatures that say 'Formerly known as [insert old screen name]' I just can't seem to figure out how they changed it, and no ...

I agree. I first finished the series in grade 4, but I have re-read them many times. Instead of getting more dull, they seem to be more captivating each time ...

:lol: The lines to this poem came to me last night...please critique! p.S. This is my first real poem on YWS, so don't kill me, okay? :wink: -------------------- The sky ...

hhmmm... I currenly like first time. Much as I'd rather say tons of nice things about it, right now, all I can say is: Love is terrible. It's enticing, breath-taking, ...

Thanks you guys! I'm going to add and edit soon. -I agree with you ئ twit ئ; after re-reading it, it seemed like they were a bit Sue-ish. But they ...

That'd be great; I'm intertested in reading it! :D