Wolf

A while ago, I finished 'The Outsiders'. I was deeply moved by this story--and shocked. It was just so raw, and so brutally honest. I also saw the movie. Of ...

I loved that! :D It flowed really nicely and projected excellent images in my head. The words you used were vivid, poignant, and they keep repeating themselves over and over ...

I agree with Azila and canislupus :) This was interesting--it caught my attenion and held it until the end. It is rather short though... If you post more, I'll read ...

I agree with BBB and Swirl Antara; you should use 'Why'd you go' less and change the last two phrases. This is very sad--but I like it too. Anyways, Keep ...

The roar of the bass like waves on the shore caressing my face shattering my inner core [comment 1] The cry of the violin like the song of the eagle ...

Very nice! It's about the Twilight trilogy, right? I've read those books. They rock! The only thing that bothered me was that in places it sounded a bit stiff. Here's ...

That was really cool! I love wolves--actually, I'm working on a story called 'Wolf Heart' :P Azila already mentioned all the things I noticed, so I haven't got anything, well, ...

Short, but very nice! Lovely descriptions! In the Land of Harmony By Summer Chapter 1 A Drop of Sun Across the room he sits, like a drop of golden sun. ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! :D I'm interested in your story--if you want a critique, PM me ^_^ Heehee, I love your screen name!

Well...*frowns* It's definitely not my kind of poem--too, erm, soppy. Also, I couldn't help but notice that someone called Darren_Shan_fan wrote a poem that is very, very similar. The exact ...

Banned for having a cute-evil avvie!

I'm sorry, but that was the most gruesome, horrific, gory thing I have ever read in my entire life. I actually felt sick reading that--cutting out people's eyes? Killing their ...

Thanks! Squee--I'm getting so many critiques! Yayness! =) Oh I'm in such a good mood! *does cartwheel* Wheee! Anyways, I'll stop being crazy now so I can go eat dinner ...

Hey Heather! Welcome to YWS! It's a great site :D My real name is Camille, but you can call me Ayra. Whatever suits you best ^^ As for the writing, ...

Ok, here's the first profile from my story. She's the main character ^^ (More will be added soon) Profile--Ayra Name: Ayra Gender: Female English translation for name: Dark star Race: ...